Dear Senator Casey,
Hello, I am Michael Kane, a sixteen year-old Junior from Haverford High School, I am writing to you to try and gain your support for S:1108, a bill that would provide local communities with the necessary tools for the use of solar energies. The bill is called 10 Million Dollar Solar Roofs Act of 2011, I believe this bill can push us as a country towards cleaner energy and less dependence on foreign energies. The bill itself has bipartisan support, which is quite lacking in our current congress; this should be even more reason for your support.
The bills overall goal is to help America become a source of green energy and to make us independent of other nations' energy. As a student I don't have any power accept my voice, I am calling out to you in support of this bill. I feel as though this bill would largely help our country even if my own community is not affected by the bill. As the bill itself funds the teaching of techniques such as the installation of solar panels, it would not only create jobs now, but also lead to future jobs in the solar panel industry.
Though this may not convince you, I am happy to be able to confer my opinion to you.
Soon-to-be-Voter,
Michael Kane
1. Yes (could be either rep)
ReplyDelete2. Yes
3. "bills should be bill's (Second paragraph)
accept should be except
4. This is pretty good. You could send this to both Senators because of the bipartisan support.
I'm not sure about the last line in the first paragraph though.